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"Tripping Into The Past"

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  1. LadyPeterbilt

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    I didn't want to take away from Ani's thread and poem, so here goes....

    This has 50 Sweet song titles in it. Took a bit to manipulate and have it make sense, but it got done ok..

    "Tripping Into The Past"

    Got my mind thinking
    In a dream on kind of way,
    How your past crawls back like a cockroach
    And a dangerous game again we play..

    There’s a fountain of reminders
    And the sixteens come flying back,
    We breakdown and daydream
    Look for the lost action we lack..

    This doesn’t fade away
    Even into the night,
    Jump the fence back into time
    And that leap of faith, again, sets all right..

    Hold me once again
    Like you’re crazy and free,
    Like a miss demeanour living inside
    As the truest healer allows you to see..

    At midnight you get hit
    Funk it up, live for the day,
    Your past no longer slow motion
    Tell yourself I’m on my way..

    Chop chop and call me
    In a blockbuster kind of tone,
    I’ll be with you soon, in a fever of love
    No one can take away the music that’s our own..

    Let’s do it again
    Our souls a Dorian Gray,
    Yell proudly I wanna be committed
    I wish you would do as I say..

    It’s lonely out there
    And it makes me wonder most,
    Is this an identity crisis or am I invisible
    Should I stand up to the hellraiser I host..

    Keeping the eye games under wraps
    As you hide the inner fox on the run,
    You’d do it all over again, and again
    Like white mice in their wheel of fun..

    Not all of us are airheads and cover girls
    We get ourselves hypnotized by laughter and pain....
    We see the hard times and the heartbreak today
    So set me free, please, in yesterday’s rain.

    Candy
    20 Sept. ‘07
    (Copyrighted)

    pt2
    Posted 4 years ago #  

  3. AniseedRock22350

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    oh...i'm jealous....you succeded where i didn't somewhere in the archives of my rough copies...i have a started sweet titles poem...but i gave up on it because most of it sucked...that is wicked awesome...i'd be sure as hell fucking proud of that if i'd written it. :D

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    Posted 4 years ago #  

  4. LadyPeterbilt

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    Well, thanks, but don't be jealous, ok? I just got this wild hair up my ass one day, and worked at it for a couple hours. Sometimes, it's all that it takes. Go through what you've written, and just give it some thought, I am sure you will be able to salvage the snippets into something amazing.

    Like the one day I was out and about, doing some errands...... groceries, banking, shit like that..... and was getting pretty damned nutso about traffic, and having to think, that when a Sweet song came on the rock station, it was prime poetry for thought.

    I have it here for you:

    "Sweet Song On The Radio"

    Something had to give
    For me, again, to truly live,
    A song and a melody
    Opened my eyes to see……….
    Slowly I have come around
    Feet firm back on the ground,
    Took a trip to days past
    To a time when life was a blast……….

    Sweet song on the radio
    Turned me upside down,
    A Sweet song on the radio
    Made a smile from my frown.

    Up again ‘way past 2 am
    I live through where I began,
    In floods the music memories
    Once again the soul sees………
    Time may come, time may go
    Life changes from what we know,
    The things held so very near
    Is the music we used to once hear………

    Sweet song on the radio
    Turned me upside down,
    A Sweet song on the radio
    Made a smile from a frown….

    Easy as this truly is
    With life complicated all around,
    A Sweet song on the radio
    Gives back memories lost, now found.

    Candy
    14 Sept. ‘07
    (Copyrighted)

    8)

    pt2
    Posted 4 years ago #  

  5. AniseedRock22350

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    i could almost sing along to that one..lol...i posted one of my Sweet based ones on HSH in the thoughts/poetry forum...it's called Tiger Eyes...i'm quite proud of that..i bet you can guess who it's about.. :mrgreen:

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  6. LadyPeterbilt

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    I shall check it out.

    I have my own thread of stuff there.... keep it all in one spot.. look for the truck.

    pt2
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  7. LadyPeterbilt

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    I will pop this on here, too, for the Glamsters of the board, seeings it's a Sweet poem....

    Something Sweet

    Somewhere I lost my way
    To roots I have grown,
    Sometimes I need to find
    What I once had known………

    Some place I set aside
    What I truly held dear,
    Found it once again
    And to me it drew near………

    Left my soul
    On something sour,
    Found again
    In a curious hour;
    What I missed
    At major cost,
    Was something Sweet
    That’s what I lost.

    You fly along life
    Your soul’s been set aside,
    Forget you crossed a line
    You should not abide…..

    Life tells you to ignore
    Then a memory comes back,
    That is when you realize
    Just when…..
    You jumped the wrong track………

    Left my soul
    On something sour,
    Found again
    In a curious hour;
    What I missed
    At major cost,
    Was something Sweet
    Is what I lost.

    Won’t make that mistake again…..
    Won’t let it go away……
    Got the memory where it belongs…….
    Will never again let it stray………

    Left my soul
    On something sour,
    Found again
    In a curious hour;
    What I missed
    At major cost,
    Was something Sweet
    That’s what I lost………….

    Here is where I belong
    In memories revived,
    I think I can finally say
    I once again have arrived………

    Left my soul
    On something sour,
    Found again
    In a curious hour……….
    What I missed
    At major cost,
    I needed something Sweet
    It’s what I lost……..

    Candy
    31 March ‘07
    (Copyrighted)

    pt2
    Posted 4 years ago #  

  8. LadyPeterbilt

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    Bumped up for Stanley...... :)

    pt2
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  9. LadyPeterbilt

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    The Soul’s Food

    Music is the soul’s groovy food
    No matter what your mood,
    In the daylight sun, or darkest grey…….
    Music feeds us every day.

    Got to wondering what I’d do
    If it weren’t for the old and new,
    From home made, to far off nations
    Music from so many generations..
    That sound isn’t always the same
    They all have different types of names,
    Yet it matters not when you need
    Music for your soul to feed…

    Music is the soul’s groovy food
    No matter what your mood,
    In the daylight sun, or darkest grey…
    Music feeds us every day.

    Got to thinking all about
    How you can’t help but shout,
    To metal’s beat, .. or even cry…
    When the saddest of all makes you sigh;
    Tears you into different directions
    The swarming warmth of music selections,
    Always there, within reach, you know
    To feed your hungry, craving soul…

    Music is the soul’s groovy food
    Doesn’t matter what your mood,
    In the daylight’s sun, or the night’s grey
    Music feeds us every day….

    You feel better, don’t you know
    When music allows you to grow,
    Outside a comfort level you see
    A world’s wide variety……

    Because...
    Music truly is the soul’s grooviest food
    It can change with many a mood,
    Can make daylight out of the night grey
    Music feeds our souls every day.

    Candy
    16 Jan. ‘08
    (Copyrighted)

    pt2
    Posted 4 years ago #  

  10. AniseedRock22350

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    mmm...i'm hungry for music now. :mrgreen:

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  11. Stanley

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    LP, this is truly amazing work. You (and Ani) are true talents!! I love Tripping Into The Past

    "I'M BACK!!"
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  12. LadyPeterbilt

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    Thank you very much, Stanley.......

    pt2
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  14. Broncotwerp

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    Those are amazing. I would love to write the music to go with them. Can't write poetry to save my arse. I really respect you guys. Like I said, if you'd let me, I'd love to stick some melody and harmony behind your beautiful words. :)

    "Do ya want me to be sleazy, Do ya want me to be eazy? Oh Baby, my heart goes boom!"

    Scritt Scrat -- Piece of Me
    Posted 3 years ago #  

  15. LadyPeterbilt

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    Thanks, there, BT......... 'preciate the kind words.

    Which are you thinking?

    Writing has been a bitch lately. I decided to put paint on canvas, as of late. I have a couple that probably need writing, but my mind has been garbaged up royal. Thank GAWD for the colours of blue and black.

    pt2
    Posted 3 years ago #  

  16. Broncotwerp

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    Any of them would work, which is your favorite? Can't wait to get a piano back in here so I can work on music again.

    "Do ya want me to be sleazy, Do ya want me to be eazy? Oh Baby, my heart goes boom!"

    Scritt Scrat -- Piece of Me
    Posted 3 years ago #  

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