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Glitterstorm...a glam rocker poem.

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  1. AniseedRock22350

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    Glitterstorm.
    silver rain in the sky
    dab a little around my eye
    extreme
    look like a queen
    but it keeps you keen

    bitch

    you know you love it really
    every time i do it daily
    you're jealous cos you don't sparkle
    you're still stuck in a dark hole.

    extreme
    we're meeting them at the stream
    it's 72
    but they don't wanna rock with you

    bitch

    colour fills this otherwise black and white world
    this glitterstorm whisks you into it
    like dorothy to oz
    no reasons. simply because.

    foundation makes for layer on layer
    a curl, a crimp, a straightened hair
    ribbons add for a touch of class
    if you don't like it kiss my ass

    bitch

    cos i'm a glam rocker
    and to it i'm hitched.
    to the end
    no matter what
    glam rock is exactly what i got.

    :wink: :roll: "I Want Some Glam RockingZ in My StockingZ!!!" :roll: :wink:
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  3. Syndrome477

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    came out good! did you put it up on yor site?

    "I even had a little mini skirt and waistcoat made for Wig Wam Bam. The skirt was so short, my undercart hung beneath the hem. I thought it best to keep my underwear on"-Steve Priest
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  4. AniseedRock22350

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    not yet...but it's in a blog.

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  5. motleyguy

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    that's a really good poem.

    Just out of curiosity though, when it comes to the 'bitch' part. Is that yelled out at the top of your lungs and the the other verses softly spoken. That sure would have some impact.

    Rock & roll over babe
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  6. AniseedRock22350

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    well...you can yell it out if you want...i certainly included attitude in it when i wrote it.

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  7. AniseedRock22350

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    bump.

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  8. motleyguy

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    I really like this. :?

    Rock & roll over babe
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  9. AniseedRock22350

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    i noticed..lol...thanks

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  10. Stanley

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    That's a fantastic piece of work, Aniseed! Do you write songs, too?

    "I'M BACK!!"
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  11. kissangel

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    That's awesome Aniseed!

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  12. kissangel

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    I would like to hear more!

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  14. AniseedRock22350

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    yeah..but most of my songs end up shit...there is some half decent ones..but i'm in the middle of sorting them out...whereas i seem to write at least a poem a week if not more....i generally write on what i'm feeling...sowhen i wrote this, i was getting slightly pissed off at people who didn't like me for me...it was pre-October for sure.

    as for hearing more...hmm..deep in the archives i have 378 finished and 7 that need work...and one of them's a pain in the ass.

    i'll have to look at my songs and get back to you.

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  15. Stanley

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    That's amazing, Aniseed, I am impressed. I gave up on writing originals years ago! You should consider trying to write when you're happy instead of when oyu're pissed off, you may end up composing hte next Glam rock classic!!

    "I'M BACK!!"
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  16. AniseedRock22350

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    i don't get all that pissed off nowadays..which i'm pleased about...but some of my best poems came out of my depression...the songs came from all over the place and not just one mood....yeah who knows...i mean one of my songs came from a lunchtime band i was in..they wrote one verse and buggered off...so i finished it off...and true it's got nothing on Poison or Kiss numbers etc. it's not that bad if i do say so myself.

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  17. LadyPeterbilt

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    I like it.

    Never stop writing. I tend to write myself, Ani. Sometimes they make sense, sometimes they don't, but I keep trying. You did an excellent job on this. :)

    @ Stanley: Too bad. I'd like to read what you've written.

    Maybe I should post the Sweet one I wrote..... has 50 song titles in it.....

    pt2
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  18. Stanley

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    Aniseed, lets have the lyrics to the 'lunchtime band' song then!!

    LadyPeterbilt, there's nothing exciting about what I wrote years ago, it was nothing deep or meaningful, just all about sex, rock and roll and parties!!! :-) But I'm sure we'd all love to see the SWEET song!! Please post!!! :D

    "I'M BACK!!"
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  19. AniseedRock22350

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    oh good god...here we go:

    actually no, wait..it's in my schoolbag...but i will edit this post when i can be bothered to reach for the bag and post it.

    *Edit*
    ok...it's not bad to say i was working with what a few 10 year olds wrote...and it's one of those songs that makes limited sense.

    1863 by The Wolly Wobbers (go on laugh)

    Oh back in 1863,
    My mama said to me,
    Don’t go outside,
    I feel a storm tonight.
    So I goes outside,
    And looks around,
    And lightning struck the tree.
    Like my mama said to me.

    Oh back in good old 63,
    My mama so close to me.
    We had a yard,
    Out back with trees,
    A blowing in the breeze.
    Just my mama and me.

    In that 1863,
    My papa was away,
    But he used to send a letter everyday.
    Then one day,
    We didn’t get one,
    And my mama said he’d died.
    I sure hoped that she’d lied.

    The coming storm,
    It came and took,
    Love from good old 63.
    Standing by an open grave,
    My mama and me,
    Please save a place for me.

    Oh back in 1863,
    My mama said to me,
    Don’t go outside,
    I feel a storm tonight.
    So I goes outside,
    And looks around,
    And lightning struck the tree.
    Like my mama said to me.
    Oh yeah!
    Like my mama said to me.
    Oh yeah!

    -maybe not the hit glam record...but i was also a 60s chick at this point.

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  20. LadyPeterbilt

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    "LadyPeterbilt, there's nothing exciting about what I wrote years ago, it was nothing deep or meaningful, just all about sex, rock and roll and parties!!! :-) But I'm sure we'd all love to see the SWEET song!! Please post!!! :D "
    - Stanley

    I posted my own thread for it, Stanley

    http://www.glamrock.com/blog/forum/topic/tripping-into-the-past

    Just so as to not take anything away from Ani's thread.

    :)

    pt2
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  21. TrashiiGuns

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    Lovin' the poems. You did an amazing job! I love the line "if you don't like it kiss my ass" in Glitterstorm :)

    Rock is dead. Long live paper and scissors.
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  22. LadyPeterbilt

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    "1863" is really good, Ani! Keep it up!! 8)

    pt2
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  23. AniseedRock22350

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    yeah..i keep getting told i have an attitude problem...and i tell them, no! there is no problem. :D

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  25. LadyPeterbilt

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    Is ok, when I was your age, I was told the same thing. I haven't changed....

    I love my attitude. Is the one thing I can truly call my own. That is why poetry helps.... you can say something without having to open your mouth.. *wink*

    pt2
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  26. AniseedRock22350

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    i love my attitude too. and my poetry lifts me up..one of the most recent ones i wrote, i absolutely love, i mean one of the ones i'm writing is also a pain in the ass as i mentioned before..but that's from lack of knowledge on the subject, and it happens...and the other day i started one about GR.com, and i really got one part down on it....only 28 more to go on that..lol

    1863 had only one verse for 7 years...it was really a pre-teenybop concept over a band, but we were for a few weeks 'The Wolly Wobbers' marching around the playground with that little ditty, but by then i was used to being marched around the playground singing....since one of my friends used to drag me round singing a song from a musical....but i found the song in the middle of last year and decided to add to it....it's amazing what you find when you're mum puts her foot down about tidying your room.

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  27. LadyPeterbilt

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    Ah, "The Snippet Concept"...... been there, done that! I have a few dozen that are just that, snippets of thought, that just have to stay that way. May be only a stanza, or a couple, but they are complete thoughts within themselves. One poem I found in this cluster-fuck I call a home office, presented itself to me, and I could not leave it alone, and another snippet fit. Meh, what the hell... I combined them.

    As for the fan poetry, Sweet is one I wrote for, and Judas Priest is the other. My friend has saved them to his site, along with some of the ones he considers my best. I love the hell out of him....... he never fails to help me improve upon what he considers (not me, but we artsy-fartsy types are never good enough for ourselves, lol) brilliant. I keep telling him that he's crazy... :lol:

    I do, however, need to get to a poem I need writing for a band that is local here. Something hit, and the words are running around my head with high heels on them. I need to get them on paper, and make them put on moccasins...

    pt2
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  28. AniseedRock22350

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    i have a writing website myself...but, as yet there is no poetry on it...just my rock-lit....well the chapters of it that i've uploaded.

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  29. LadyPeterbilt

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    I don't have a site, per se, more like a place where everything goes, and the board is owned by 2 admins (I'm the third).

    I don't want to flood boards out when I get creative. Probably should set my own up.....

    pt2
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  30. AniseedRock22350

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    all mine are on a memory stick...i wonder if i could get one for my brain as well as the computer...but anyways...i have one on a bulletin called 'Shakespeare was a glam rocker' thanks to an english lesson that made me think...see, thinking; there is a first time for everything...lol :mrgreen:

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  31. LadyPeterbilt

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    Thinking is ok, neccesary evil..... :lol:

    pt2
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  32. AniseedRock22350

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    well...it occurred to me who wouldn't want Poison in their ears? :mrgreen:

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  33. LadyPeterbilt

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    I popped another poem in my thread for you to see......

    pt2
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